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Post by Lizzy on Mar 16, 2008 11:51:09 GMT -5
Prologue Elizabeth stood their, watching as the boat drifted of into the distance, then disappeared in a green flash. The waves rolled over her feet, but she didn’t move, tears silently fell into the sea. “Will” she whispered one more time before slowly walking back over to the rock where the chest was sitting. Only ten more years and Will should return she thought then walked off with the chest close to her heart, feeling it’s beat rhythmically with her. Chapter 1 Yoho haul together hoist the colours high Heave to, Thieve and beggers never shall we dieElizabeth sang quietly as she walked along the shores looking shelter for the rest of her life. She heard voices coming from a mile or two ahead. I thought this was deserted Elizabeth thought starting to run. When she got to the source of the voices she found a small little town with quaint little cottages. She saw a woman walking towards her, she stood there as the woman got closer towards her. “Hello, My name is Juliette Smithson, are you lost from the remains of a shipwreck?” she asked cheerily. “Oh yes, um I’m from a shipwreck, I got separated from my husband” Elizabeth stammered feeling a little lump in her throat at the thought of Will. “Oh dear I’m sorry, what’s your name?” she asked with concern in her eyes. “It’s Elizabeth Turner, my husband was a merchant of some sort if you will” Elizabeth said quickly. “Oh well I can help you find a cottage if you want?” Juliette asked. Elizabeth looked her up and down, she looked well off enough, her raven black hair was pinned back out of her face, and her blue eyes were lit up in happiness. “Ok, sure would you happen to have a sword, pistol, or cutlass by any chance?” Elizabeth asked cautiously. “Oh no women carrying a pistol or cutlass, ha, I would kill to see the day a women even wore pants then hold a cutlass, that’s to piratey for normal ladies” Juliette said laughing. Elizabeth looked down and thought back when she did all those things. “Oh yes silly me, before we were shipwrecked, um we had a pirate encounter, so I’m just a little cautious” Elizabeth said laughing lightly. “Oh you poor thing those pirates are horrible” Juliette said. “Oh yes, yes they are” Elizabeth said thinking about Will and their adventures together. “Oh well anyways how about we find you a cottage and some reasonable clothes” she said looking Elizabeth up and down. “Oh I like these clothes” Elizabeth said quickly. “Well you have to look a little decent” Juliette said. “I said I’m fine, I like these clothes” Elizabeth said her voice rising as she got angrier. “Ok well then come on” Juliette said taking her hand and leading her into the town. “Oh wait I forgot something” Elizabeth said remembering the chest, which she had left deep in a cave. “Oh you can get it later” she said. “Ah this should fit you well” Juliette said leading Elizabeth into a perfect sized cottage. “Oh this is wonderful, but are you sure that you can just walk in and stay here?” Elizabeth asked. “Oh you have to pay a small fee of 4 coins but I’ll pay it for you since you probably don’t have any money. “Oh no I think I have some” Elizabeth said reaching into a little sewed on pocket. She pulled out 6 coins except one was a piece of eight that Will had found and given her. “Oh is that a....never mind” Juliette said. “it’s just a little something my husband gave me” she said quickly shoving the piece of eight back into her pocket. “Here’s the four coins” I said handing them to Juliette. “Ok, how about you come to the main house and hand it in ok?” she said handing Elizabeth back the money. “Ok” Elizabeth said, “Wait how do I know which cottage is mine?” she added quickly. “Oh let’s make you a sign and hang it on the door to mark it” Juliette thought quickly. “Ok, how about we carve on this stone?” she asked. “Ok but how are you going to carve it without a sharp object?” Juliette asked. “Oh simple” Elizabeth said pulling out the part of sword Jack had given Will to stab the heart. Looking at Juliette’s face Elizabeth realized she wasn’t supposed to have it. “Umm I found it with the debris and thought I would need it for protection” she said quickly. “Oh, ok then” Juliette said. After Elizabeth had carved Turner Residence into the stone and set it on the doorstep they set off. ---------------------- Hey all! This is my first fic so please no bashing
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Post by AJ on Mar 16, 2008 17:51:31 GMT -5
this is great....I love it!!!...please keep updating!!
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Post by Lizzy on Mar 16, 2008 18:42:51 GMT -5
aw thanks
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Post by KayNicole on Mar 16, 2008 19:15:48 GMT -5
awesome! keep it up! cant wait for more!
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Post by Lizzy on Mar 17, 2008 6:51:02 GMT -5
lol thanks
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Post by Lizzy on Mar 17, 2008 15:20:00 GMT -5
Chapter 2 The a few weeks later, Elizabeth set off to the place where the chest was hiding. After an hour of walking away from the village she saw a cave with a tiny bit of black cloth hanging next to it. I found it she thought and snuck into the cave. She kept walking until she hit the cave wall, then Elizabeth crouched down and felt around. Her hand finally landed on the smooth engraved wood of the chest. She put it close to her heart and felt the heart beating. “Oh Will” she said aloud then stood up and walked out of the cave. She picked up the cloth she had left under a rock and wrapped the chest in it. When she finally got back into the cottage she hid the chest under the bed. She walked into the kitchen, just then someone knocked on the door. She opened it up, and outside one person who she never thought would be standing there was. “Hello, love, do you want to set out on an adventure?” said Jack Sparrow. -------------------- Hey all, that was just a short little chapter! I hope you liked it!
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Post by AJ on Mar 17, 2008 15:27:54 GMT -5
YEAH!!! JACK is BACK!!!!! I love it...keep it up
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Post by Lizzy on Mar 17, 2008 16:20:40 GMT -5
Ok I have the third chapter done already! Here it is! ------------------------ Chapter 3 “J-Jack?” Elizabeth asked confused. “At your service, how are you love? Has life been treating you well?” Jack asked. “Uh, what are you doing here?” Elizabeth asked still in shock. “Why I’m here to take you to the Fountain of Youth so you can be with your beloved William forever” Jack said using his hand motions. “Don’t you mean so you can be immortal?” Elizabeth said quickly. “Well yes, that too” he said after a while. “O-ok” Elizabeth stammered. ----------------------------- “Captain? Hello, are you listening? Captain Turner!” exclaimed Bootstrap. “Huh? What?” Will said coming out of his daze. “Son, were you listening to anything I just said?” his father asked. “Yes, well actually no” he said sighing. “Elizabeth?” Bootstrap asked concerned. “Yes, I can’t take my mind off of her, she’s a part of my wonderful, wonderful world” he said staring off into the distance wondering what his wife was doing at the moment. ----------------------- Elizabeth sighed, “Ahh thinking about dear William I sense?” Jack asked. “yeah, I miss him, Jack when we set sail can I send a note to Will?” she asked. “Yes we’ll figure a way but come on pack up your stuff let’s go” Jack urged on barging through the door looking around. “Ok? but what about my house? I can’t just leave it” Elizabeth said getting distressed. “Well find someone to take care of it for you, but I recommend that you take a VERY special item with you” he said inspecting the furniture. “You mean the chest!” Elizabeth exclaimed. “Ahh I knew Will gave it to you” he said. “Oh great…oh hold on” Elizabeth said grabbing a bucket and started retching. “Lizzie, are you ok?” Jack asked in a concerned in a weird way. “Yes I’m fine, this has been going on for a few day” she said wiping her mouth with her arm. “Ok, well come on gather up your stuff, we’re leaving in a day or so. --------------------------------- “I think something is wrong with Elizabeth” Will said to his father. “How can you tell?” Bootstrap asked looking at his son. “I can feel it in my heart” he said softly. “Son, you don’t have…” his father started. “I have a heart, it’s with Elizabeth!” he said his voice rising. “I’ll be on my way then sir” his father muttered then walked back out onto the deck. “Will sat down on his cot and sighed. He felt, emotions. “What is wrong with me” he said slamming his hand against the nearest wall. “I need Elizabeth” he whispered. Laying down he closed his eyes and got ready to dream about his life if he could be with Elizabeth.
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Post by AJ on Mar 17, 2008 16:29:26 GMT -5
oooooppp.....i something going to happen that I think is going to happen??......hmm.......I wonder......but ....WILL IS BACK!!! AND JACK IS BACK!! it's great....I love it!!!
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Post by Lizzy on Mar 17, 2008 16:35:49 GMT -5
Aww thanks so much! Yes I think you have a slight idea on what's going to happen
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Post by AJ on Mar 17, 2008 17:01:30 GMT -5
mmmmmmawhahahahahahhahahah.....I love the way you think...........heheh.............this is great
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Post by Lizzy on Mar 17, 2008 17:05:41 GMT -5
thank you *takes bow*
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Post by KayNicole on Mar 17, 2008 18:31:25 GMT -5
O-M-G!!!! UPDATE SOON! MY GOD! I HOPE THEY REUNITE! I'M JUMPING UP AND DOWN OVER HERE!
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Post by Lizzy on Mar 17, 2008 18:39:24 GMT -5
Julez...calm...down...I'm working on the third chapter right now ;D
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Post by AJ on Mar 17, 2008 18:47:07 GMT -5
I can understand why she can't calm down.....I CAN'T EITHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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