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Post by AJ on Mar 17, 2008 18:53:43 GMT -5
eee...I just did......I'm scared.........
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Post by Lizzy on Mar 17, 2008 19:14:23 GMT -5
oh I'm going to post!
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Post by AJ on Mar 17, 2008 19:16:12 GMT -5
I can't post anything right now......
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Post by AJ on Mar 17, 2008 19:20:30 GMT -5
I'm having trouble....I don't nkwo how
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Post by Lizzy on Mar 17, 2008 19:41:23 GMT -5
hmm did you activate your account?
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Post by AJ on Mar 17, 2008 19:42:53 GMT -5
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Will sat there. watching, remembering. Little tidbits from his memory crossed his mind. He could see her. He could feel her. He could love her, even though she carried his heart, but he didn't need a heart. He didn't need anything to prove his love to her. He could feel something was wrong even though they were worlds away from each other. His chest tightened and relaxed as though "it" was still there. To him is was. To her, he wasn't sure if she knew what responisbility that goes into protecting his heart not to metion her own. Her heart was of glass like her emtions. She wore them both on her sleeve. He knew this from knowing her for so long. Was she ready to gaurd his heart for the rest of her life? How long would that be? but he wouldn't worry about that today. tomorrow would con to soon and he had to get back to the crew. His thoughts quickly trailed back to her and how her hair blew in the breeze when the wind was high. He hurt. All over. Even his heart hurt. He missed her. So much. To much, but that's life. He would worry about it when day broke the dark, starry sky.
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Post by AJ on Mar 17, 2008 19:45:46 GMT -5
yeah...I did
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Post by Lizzy on Mar 17, 2008 19:52:35 GMT -5
hmm and that was amazing, you are an amazing writer!
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Post by AJ on Mar 17, 2008 19:59:01 GMT -5
thanks.........I'll post more tomorrow
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Post by KayNicole on Mar 17, 2008 20:00:59 GMT -5
awesome!!!
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Post by AJ on Mar 18, 2008 18:33:35 GMT -5
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I looked at Jack. “Jack, you always need my help, but not now. I have a lot of things to do.” “Like What?” I stopped dead in my tracks. What did I have to do? Will wasn’t here, I didn’t have any family, or James. Oh, James. I had litterally grown up with that man even though he was a man when I was but eight years old. I missed him.......and I had given him what seemed to me like the “Kiss Of Death”and it was my specialty. Jack(temporailly), James, then Will. “Oh!”I collapsed, grabbed my stomach, and tried to hold back tears. Something was ripping, tearing, burning my insides and it never seemed to stop. I laid there, on the grainy texture of the ground I was now crippled upon. Jack was thinking about whether to come to my aid right now or wait a few minutes. I shrivled even further together and I was now sobbing, even harder than I had when Will had left. My body was shaking with pain. I couldn’t make my muscles function....or even my brain. After Jack had finally stopped thinking he rushed to my side, puted me up and held me close and I didn’t fight him. I couldn’t. “Will!”
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Don't be to harsh....I did this really late last night
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Post by Lizzy on Mar 18, 2008 20:11:42 GMT -5
I really love your writing!
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Post by AJ on Mar 18, 2008 20:37:15 GMT -5
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From afar, Will heard it. He heard the scream of pain and suffering, but he had heard this several times since he took up his latest job as captain of the most cursed ship to sail the seven seas. He was labeled that and always would be. This scream, it was different. He knew it, he could feel it echo, deep within his loins. It was Elizabeth, his beloved, who was suffering. Then, he felt it too. Like a tone of bricks hitting him smack in the face, 10 thousand knives stabbing at his heart. It hit him, the cold hard wooden plank of a deck. It seemed to call him to pain. He was feeling what Elizabeth was feeling. Pain of loss. It was all around him, circling in different colors, until finally, all went black.
He could see her face, smell her hair, feel her bare skin against his and the passion, deep within his soul.........and that last kiss.......was more than he could possibly stand. He wanted to stay there, holding her forever, never letting go, never taking his gaze off of hers but he had to. He walked down that beach into the sea, tears streaming down his face.
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Post by AJ on Mar 19, 2008 16:23:43 GMT -5
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I stood there, Shaking my head. ‘No, this is just a dream, he’s not leaving.’ but he just kept walking. ‘ No, I thought. ‘No! Don’t leave me, not here, not now! Not when I need you the most.’ “Will!” I finally yelled. I did a mad dash toward him as he gathered me up in his arms ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Post by Lizzy on Mar 19, 2008 17:38:53 GMT -5
aww
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