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Post by AJ on Mar 17, 2008 16:46:30 GMT -5
I just love this song....It's great and I thought it would go well with the story.....so... www.youtube.com/watch?v=AKZMAG0jLcU~~~~~~~~~~~Wait for You~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I was there. I remembered it all. The rain. The fighting. The endless war between two different worlds. Then, my world seemed to stop. The rain continued to pour as I made my way over to my husband who seemed to be taking his very last few breaths. 'This was to much' I thought, as I tried to hold him close. I was trying to convince him that he would be alright, but I knew better. We both did. Life happened as life does and I moved on....except for now. I was on a beach, watching my beloved sail away. Not able to see him for ten years. Not able to hold him close, touch him, or even love him. I was alone but then again.....so was he. Was I going to make it through this? Will I suvive? No, I thought......it isn't possible.......I have to get him back. I want to love him again.....feel him close. Because I promised him I would wait forever.......Did I lie?
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Post by Lizzy on Mar 17, 2008 16:48:53 GMT -5
Oh my gosh that is beautiful, such description! I wish I could write like that! Keep it up!
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Post by AJ on Mar 17, 2008 16:52:38 GMT -5
thanks.........your an excellent writer too!!
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Post by Lizzy on Mar 17, 2008 17:01:39 GMT -5
Aw thanks but I don't add such description like you do
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Post by AJ on Mar 17, 2008 17:03:21 GMT -5
i write fragments....woops
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Post by Lizzy on Mar 17, 2008 17:05:14 GMT -5
it's ok lmao.
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Post by AJ on Mar 17, 2008 17:16:38 GMT -5
here's the next bit
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Did I lie? No, I couldn't have lied. I loved him Damn it! I mean, I love him. But he was gone. I wonder if he is thinking right now of the life we could have had together? God. Why must I punish my self with these thoughts? It's his fault. No! It's my fault. He tried to save me. He could have just stayed there and watched me die if it ment he would live but.....we still wouldn't be together. I was trapped by my own denial. I couldn't breathe. I was holding my throat and coughing. Oh, how I could just fall down and die now, like he died in my arms. Great!I couldn't breathe and I was dying inside.....one bit at a time.
I remember when we met all those years ago. I remember the wind was tugging at my curls. " Look, There's a boy in the water!" I yelled, shocked at my discovery. A man named james norrigton, who would be my temporary fiancee in 8 years yelled "Man overboard!"
Then I came back to my senses......that was all I could remember before I collapsed on the same beach that I watched my husband sail away on. I did love him, but I was sick to my stomach with regret.
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Post by Lizzy on Mar 17, 2008 17:57:15 GMT -5
Oh poor Elizabeth! Update Soon! I'm begging you!
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Post by AJ on Mar 17, 2008 18:10:04 GMT -5
mmm....okay....I'm kind of thinking this up at the top of my head so....i'll come up with something later....watching family guy right now and trying to think......mmm....
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Post by KayNicole on Mar 17, 2008 18:27:14 GMT -5
omg! you guys are both awesome!! i gotta write my own fic! lmao! very good! write more soon!
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Post by AJ on Mar 17, 2008 18:33:54 GMT -5
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I woke up the next morning with Will shaking me to my senses. For a minute I laid there, taking it in. ' It was all a dream' I thought. "Oh, Will, I missed you." I said without opening my eyes. " It's not Will, love." I reconized that raspy voice the minute it muttered the first syllable. "Jack?" I shouldn't have even asked because I knew, and I knew why he was back. He wasn't here for me, he was here for another one of his "secert grand adventures of the infamous Jack Sparrow." That was him, it always would be. Then I remember something that I did that drove will sheer over the wall. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
In an instant, it happened. I kissed him. I claimed his lips against mine and he claimed mine. I couldn't do it for long, I couldn't hurt Will like that, I wouldn't, but he tasted so good. I didn't let go till I heard the click of the irons on his wrist. "It's after you, not the ship. Not us. This is the only way you see?" he didn't say anything for a few moments. Then he muttered the word "Pirate." loud enough so I could hear. I walked away. Silently crying to myself of the sin I had commited. I had just sent a man to his death and lied to the man I love. Oh, I hoped he hadn't seen me, for if he had, I would be doomed to a life without him........and without jack. I had feelings for jack but I would be the last person to admit it. Then I saw Will's face. He saw. It was skected on his face which was now pale with shock so I knew he had seen. What have I done? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I slowly made my way off the sandy ground and onto my knees. With tearstained eyes, I looked at Jack. "Why are you here Jack?" I asked. Not the least bit curious. He replied with something I had never heard him say before, "I need your help, Elizabeth."
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Post by Lizzy on Mar 17, 2008 18:38:39 GMT -5
Aww you have a gift for writing I must say!
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Post by AJ on Mar 17, 2008 18:40:56 GMT -5
WHATEVER!!!! I am debating whether to get an account and post it on the orlando bloom files.....should I?
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Post by AJ on Mar 17, 2008 18:50:48 GMT -5
hmmm...................still debating.........I don't know!!!!!!
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Post by Lizzy on Mar 17, 2008 18:52:11 GMT -5
I think you should I might even vote for it to be best movie fic, I posted my story on there too!
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